Project Storyboard Blog Post Revision

    For me and my group's project, as I had explained before in my "Character Development Blog Post," we have decided to change the plot of our story. 

    To be specific, we will have both Asher and Austin now working on a project together, with Austin never showing up to help with its development. Then, after arriving and scaring Asher in the process, he will crudely take the work away from him to turn in as his own, causing Asher to become extremely upset. Then, in his rage, Asher will murder Austin in cold blood just like in our previous plot. After the murder sequence that would be interrupted by our title sequence, we would then transition to Asher's house. Then, as explained in our "Mise-En-Scene Blog Post #1," we would have a tracking shot of Asher walking to his room, which is where our overall opening would finally end.

    I believe that because Mrs. Stoklosa had pointed out flaws in our previous story, the revisions that we have now made have strengthened our project in general. With these new actions we will take for our project, the quality of our piece will be increased because of it. 

Here are the pictures from our new storyboard: